This next piece is intentionally longer. By using one syllable words, Jojo Ballo creates an illusion of a longer poem, that goes around the limits of the few words that can be sandwiched in a Tanaga. In a haiku, tanka or tanaga, words can can only get you so far. Syllable count had always been the harder part in writing poems with measure. However, four lines would net a writer more space for words when utilizing this device, as in this example:
The sky in its grace rained tears
The wind in its haste left years
In my mind they wear the forms
That silence the dance of storms
- Jojo Ballo, Philippines.
Very nice! It inspires me to write tanaga in English.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! It inspires me to write tanaga in English.
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the last line 'that silence the dance of storms'.
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